Monday, May 16, 2016

I am poem


I AM
Success Criteria
Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary
Choose the best nouns for the poem
Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns
Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am a reader
I wonder if I could be a horse rider
I hear the rustling of the levies
I see the wavy sparkles from  the moon
I want to have my own car to drive
I am a reader
I pretended to cry in room 16 17  and Miss Hill believed it
I feel happy to be in room 234
I touch my cat all the time
I worry that my cat will get run over
I cry when same one I know gos a away
I am a reader
I understand that we have to be great at work to get a fill lysis (full licence)  and a intersunil (international) lissins
I say we have to work  and not dsrac (distract) other people
I dream of riding horses  and unicorns
I try my best at simthing (something)
I hope I am  great  at reding

I am a reader


"I have been learning to write poems" My I am poem has got I am a reader, I wonder if I could be a horse rider, I hear the rustling of the leaves, I see wavy sparkles from the moon I want to have my own car to drive I am a reader. I am proud of my I am poem because I thought about each line. I am happy to be in room 2 3 4 I think it was fun to do my I am poem. It tells what is speshill (special) about me.

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