Saturday, May 16, 2015

Writing


4 comments:

  1. Author Ella you should be proud of this writing. You have thought about your goal of using great vocabulary. I love reading your stories you always have such exciting endings. Well done kid.

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  2. Wow Ella! You hooked me in right from the beginning because of the great vocabulary you used (unusual, swirling...). I love the questions you included because they made me think whikle I was listening to your story. You are a wonderful author!! Ms Anderson

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  3. Wow Ella! You hooked me in right from the beginning because of the great vocabulary you used (unusual, swirling...). I love the questions you included because they made me think whikle I was listening to your story. You are a wonderful author!! Ms Anderson

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  4. you are a great auther ella well done

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