I am proud of my writing because I have lots of detail. I think I chose lots of really good words in my writing. I used the thesaurus. My next step is to make my capital letters first so I dont have to go back and change them after.
Clip clop clip clop. On my birthday  we  went to horse riding because I love  horses .  The horses whoere(were) so huge we had to get same addolts to help  us on. Ow my gosh  the horses were as big as a elefint but they were a littile bit skineor  .    Me and my freneds were so exsidid to go on the horses  but   there was two sheep and do yow now  whot you coed do with  the sheep you coed ride a sheep .  The horses were creamy  white and coffee  brown . The  creamy white one was so skerey because it got  skerd  of the dogs how jumped out of the gutor.  Nay nay  both  of the horses got skered(scared) but we whornt  riding it   propuly(properly when they  run  because  we whornt(weren't) redey for  the horses  running but it was worth it because  it was so fun . Me and katie were the bravest ones of all because  we  let the reigns  go when the horses were walking .  we rode the coffee brown one was the funist(funniest)  of all  because it was the bravest horse  because it was cum(calm) and nice it didint kik.     After the horse riding we went to the park   we played pass the passl  and  pinnyrtor.   We got to have some cake and cupcakes  the cake had horses on it of the icing and the cupcakes had little white horses on it . It was like a real horse   the little  white  horse  was like the creamy white one.My birthday  was the most amasing(amazing) birthday every(ever) .

Art

Last week I did art and it was made  with water pastils.I called it Ellas amazing work. What challenged me was getting the trees in a row.I used my  deteminsine  to get the work done  . It took me 2 days to get it done we had to blend and over cot. For the sky we yosed the Matariki  stars. I was having fun in art.  We where  learning  about perspective. Perspective is when it is fur away and  small and if   it  is close it is bigger .

Wig Wednesday

On wig Wednesday  it was so cool  because  I was   so into  it and you now(know) what I had to do? I did scraping paper  to make curls with the siziz(scissors).  It was  so tricky to  glue it on because your fingers  got glue on it. We were making wigs to think about kids who have cancer. I used my perseverance mussle(muscle) to make my wig.         

Matariki

Matairki is a tip of meri (maori) salubrioun (celebration) where peppile  play maori  games . One of the games were don't  let the stiks fall down to the graned(ground) or you will be out  and the hardis(hardest) game of all was  you have to  have  three peppile  to use there(their) arms to balints(balance).  I had to make a kite on matariki  day because it was  one of the choices  we made. We used flaks(flax) and bamboo to make  the kites for  matariki  it was fun to make kites because we used  team work.I had to use my perseverance mussle (muscle) to make the string shapes. 

Art

 I have   been learning to  blend  and overlap colors . Remember  to not yous(use)  black until finished  or it will be reeked(wrecked) so you will have to start agen . There has to be a vanishing point because   it is like it has dispered (disappeared) in the disdains (distance).  
I am proud of my art because I blended my colours well.                                                                                                                  

I am poem

I AM

Success Criteria

Use a thesaurus to choose the best vocabulary

Choose the best nouns for the poem

Choose the best adjectives to describe some nouns

Leave the reader thinking about your poem by sharing what it inside you

I am a reader

I wonder if I could be a horse rider

I hear the rustling of the levies

I see the wavy sparkles from  the moon

I want to have my own car to drive

I am a reader

I pretended to cry in room 16 17  and Miss Hill believed it

I feel happy to be in room 234

I touch my cat all the time

I worry that my cat will get run over

I cry when same one I know gos a away

I am a reader

I understand that we have to be great at work to get a fill lysis (full licence)  and a intersunil (international) lissins

I say we have to work  and not dsrac (distract) other people

I dream of riding horses  and unicorns

I try my best at simthing (something)

I hope I am  great  at reding

I am a reader

"I have been learning to write poems" My I am poem has got I am a reader, I wonder if I could be a horse rider, I hear the rustling of the leaves, I see wavy sparkles from the moon I want to have my own car to drive I am a reader. I am proud of my I am poem because I thought about each line. I am happy to be in room 2 3 4 I think it was fun to do my I am poem. It tells what is speshill (special) about me.

Writing

When I was going to school in the car I saw in the  (corner) of my eye this    (dark) animal run across the road.   It stayed on the other side of the road. It was chocolate brown with a little bit of black on it. I  wonder what it could  be? I decided to look for the Animal after school. I searched  up and down the road but I didn't find it so I listened  and I heard woof woof it was so close that it made a ekow(echo). The ekow(echo) was coming from the bushes beside me so I posed(pushed) the levse(leaves) out of the way so I coed(could) see.I saw sky blue eyes staring back at me and  I just wanted to pick it up and bring it home.  it looked lonely because it didn’t have a home. So I patted it until it was calm.